Thursday 26 November 2020

Ooh no

 

The courageous scuba diver that was called Bob was researching this enormous shark. He could tell that this shark was playful because of his attitude. He saw that the shark was going around in circles so he thought that he wanted to play a game. Then suddenly the shark was swimming away then the shark came back with a shiver. (meaning for shiver is a crowd of sharks) He knew that he was their dinner do he quickly swam to his boat and got all the research on his camera.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Shivish. I think that this post is great because it has so many words that describe the shark. I like the part were it says Then suddenly the shark was swimming away then the shark came back with a shiver. So great job on your post.

    I did a lot of research on sharks and my favorite shark is a Tiger Shark because they look cool and they have teeth that are sharp. The tiger shark looks cool because it has stripes on it.

    What is your favorite Shark?

    BYE!!!

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    1. I acutely have no favorite type of shark

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  2. Kia ora, I like your post because the shark was acting friendly at the start and then he turned and came back with a few of his hungry friends.

    See you around
    Arden

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  3. Hi Shivish, thank you for sharing your work with us. I like the way that you use alot of descriptive words. Well done.

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