The Indian Americans got attacked by their neighbours the Americans. Countless people sadly died and two men and one new mother and a new born baby were the only survivors of the village the baby was screeching. The men stabbed their oars into the quiet lake and paddled every time they paddled the boat and slowly accelerated faster. They were thinking to go to the end of the lake and have a new life to be continued.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Ashton and I go to Gilberthorpe school.The thing that i thought you did well was the way you structured your blog post. and the picture you found was exactly what the writing said.
What I think you should do next is improve on the way that you put your words into the writing .