Friday 16 October 2020

The visitor

 There was a gleaming beam of light and a  compelling colossal transformer came out of the   powerful beam and he mounted. In front of the astonished crowd they were taking photos of the transformer and some people live streaming. He looked heroic because for years humanity has been getting invaded by aliens. Each time with better tech then last time but when the transformer was not on planet earth they said they had no hope but now they do.

5 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Kaito form Room 24. I really like your blog post because I like how it is a transformer and that it is eye catching. Hey I have a question for you: what is your favourite transformer movie?

    Bye blog ya later!

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    1. I don 't know my favorite transform movie but thanks for asking.

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  2. Kia ora, I like how you put in so much description into your writing.
    What would you name the transformer?

    See you around
    Arden

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  3. Hi my name is Rita L from room 25
    this writing is really nice I love how you added HEAPS of descriptive words to make your writing interesting!

    If you like can check out my blog here:MY BLOG!

    bye!!!!!!!!
    Rita

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